【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
* N2 `9 E  T6 _5 F6 b% l) ?袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

  n) m5 u' K4 a! B$ [  R, e我想我從未表露出
; R3 Y+ l' |1 q& W7 s1 Q深藏在我心底的那句
, u$ `" V1 ^7 c5 N4 n3 O# {我愛你  
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From the first moment we met,
# y' E0 c. k/ N) LI already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
7 N" R! d+ i5 R+ h  `+ s我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
$ U9 f) X5 r. E: x% [% LBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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- w% r5 @6 F$ U$ t$ N/ f5 r" b  J縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情
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- F" j4 ^" w* L7 A; B  XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
/ `, q7 t- g+ p* [# h) P為什麼
如此難以表白?

5 k/ d5 g3 D+ q9 ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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% a- M5 s+ ^+ k; rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

/ k7 c, {6 n6 P7 D1 O, p8 }# iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
! a% w7 \5 R  F& T讓我向你表白
$ c" L% K' W7 ^3 u我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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, I. x% X, T+ b不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
  F2 }9 m8 }% x0 }  }Entrust my love within your heart
) Z8 e/ E' Q5 a3 j. j7 `. y6 T$ g可否讓我托付給你?
4 p0 J0 ~2 ^* e+ Q% [5 y: H! w托付我的愛
4 Q: A' m" |6 }( ^  A2 t收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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# F" d. L9 b6 m愛  簡單一句愛
. s  W7 f/ N0 K+ S+ K  G5 T為什麼如此難以表白?
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& k! Y1 {5 M; I& p$ h! N( VI want to confess that I love you,
3 ?$ y9 \+ z2 I; I4 q% yBut I never did

% p( T8 D4 J" M8 R9 c愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
. X( s$ R9 V7 M* n3 m7 v6 D) f你將從我指間滑漏
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" `# E  D& ^" t& Q5 l! d3 fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

9 A# T  Y0 z" b希望今天還不會太晚
  Y4 V( g) d, ~讓我向你表白
0 `" R9 x- v/ v" v0 w) p我心底的秘密
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* m; z$ X- r3 w& R0 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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4 i; i3 d5 o# e0 L不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

6 {3 z7 v0 ]: H8 ~2 S1 nCan I entrust it to you?
, z0 T7 z  y# i7 Z2 ]% hEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
: z1 V9 n: l, ^8 O$ F收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
( ]) `& d& D6 b' s2 L0 S( sEntrust my love within your heart
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. W" x$ H6 K# @! ]可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿

: v# @! c) T& o: Q; U# y2 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. E( D- Y- Z1 i8 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
8 E: z% B2 [& a$ F$ F2 `( d3 g6 D凝視著星空
! ?5 a- V: I( U( w  g- ~8 E我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 J# F2 T+ U6 H6 J+ YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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0 _% \0 |- ]* {4 m- D月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
$ r. R% X' T0 F月光輕吻著夜幕
' v  r0 X+ j* @5 f# v星空充滿著歡樂

" K& X: d7 D- u# HIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

& G* ^, z! `3 A, w/ w3 Z我心卻充斥著憂鬱
) i4 W0 A$ c* X: m8 V" N6 d害怕我們的愛
3 J; ?5 J5 x& {: F  }( P* o) R終將逝去

( M( M9 x* _4 L1 D" G/ |& BYou needn’t fear anything
& g  Z0 G; H2 K' N' c/ HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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; w% `' ?  ^4 C; k) }' N$ E你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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* k$ h9 V- ?. _I love you I love you with all my heart
- M& c; x* U) z: j- Q' nNothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
: O4 i3 O5 J; E& T0 l8 A3 Z你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

- E; p5 c3 W9 K' L8 s能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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1 a& F) n, x+ ^3 f- j9 d  {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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0 V$ f: c0 a: s+ ]1 ?+ ZI want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心

. w, E3 I, [$ S7 W. n2 Z1 P* MI invite you to rip it out
1 V% ?) I1 B, r9 C  t5 MTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
: R) ?) U/ I7 X/ p. M; ^. z- R" ?5 V來證明我的愛

" u$ ~5 X, `6 ]: K% fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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" L4 _0 o$ ]. V& }! p8 ~我依然滿心憂鬱
( M8 `# |, s1 Z6 v0 a你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
+ H4 U3 R# z* K. sI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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7 ~9 ?4 {: x) {" D  b2 k可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

- w- E5 o# N; v- Z) `+ ?( d3 h: CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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( O" G/ C2 ?, ^6 W) I這樣一張巧舌
+ U5 b; K$ ~' G6 @- v  y) T0 a- B5 u% g你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* V4 U9 o+ ~2 X6 U2 n/ r如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
0 J$ D; q2 r! v. y" M% }2 z9 x千萬個心思

% }2 {8 R9 l! }9 a$ s) }* xRambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
" D' Q9 H+ Y. W愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
  b5 d" ]9 A, q/ j' cxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒