【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" j; m9 N4 ?3 z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. ]2 y7 x) s, B4 G- W# B( FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( w0 w; {- I9 N; `* ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 s, v% x0 y- P' R7 U* Z( sYou needn’t fear anything
. r/ z. J% J% O  h: A. wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; m* p* _! F* {; s5 n* h" yI really want to know just how much you love me
2 R/ x. S; ^' o; v+ K- F6 sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" u$ Z: ^( D8 J- O" ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 f* c( I3 L) }1 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 Q% V0 m) J4 Q2 V- E$ b9 B6 mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 s1 c& V2 I8 K- e$ jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" r4 X4 ]2 k+ p5 H/ \# qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ G' {( I9 P1 B" {6 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' h* z9 {$ E  ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 [1 V1 r) O. O# N, a/ _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. _( h  p' s. b6 J) j! t& d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 p- n; c9 D7 @. V/ z7 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 V4 Z/ \8 A+ ^; ^9 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ n2 C7 C0 E/ _* A. d! y. b6 i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 _) {: N9 ]/ e5 i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  `& e) X) T# \# e/ o' }/ T4 f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- O, P# \2 |) T9 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 O0 G5 {- o8 W5 @# n& j<P>你无需担心</P>
1 H7 `4 r' n6 h' o4 ?' c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ ?! O% }% s% a" Y. N6 m2 e/ y/ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* a! d. k6 Z- q/ t- e4 O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 r% f: f4 e% f  ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 S" L$ L  _7 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 k4 U& L) F- f' n" P# m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# C; [! T1 }% X  D3 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. g) x1 w0 D! O0 K- M! Z& Q# q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 v# k0 y& E! V! V' r+ ?9 s  R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. e6 A1 r7 B1 k8 w& q; b5 q2 u. @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, b1 d8 V4 R' w, N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  p, J' U! n+ Q" u, p9 I$ p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  n( o1 D" K- O% M7 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 A' j5 B4 I! g1 E' E' B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>