【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; B5 K- G' D: z8 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
% k7 f' t) ~+ c" J. B1 ]% W# I; LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% E' d* c6 T8 |/ A3 l0 ?With the moon kissing it every night
5 p1 i2 X( @8 X' xSeeing the sky content with its love
! G! L$ W! o2 ?! L2 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) t* O' \) b6 eYou needn’t fear anything
2 @! q4 e7 {, Y) aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# p' w+ G4 z7 s/ U" Z$ nI really want to know just how much you love me
7 c! M/ K1 S; a3 _! E: DI love you I love you with all my heart
' k: X+ U5 I4 f; m/ V1 _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 R' T0 j; A6 }" |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) M# T7 V* L4 `, m6 V+ S; BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 \  J, o2 o& _4 xI regret not dying
5 l6 `. T7 Q8 a3 X* d6 v# E% }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ S& E1 M- W* A, a8 Q* k& H; o- JWith such a tongue as yours,
1 Q3 f0 h- ~$ Y4 @1 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 B1 Q( H5 [0 M. `* fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" ~0 O% m: C  Q4 [9 z( U9 w" e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 y  G( s0 @* ?. I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, W* y' C" E% b: o/ f* ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 A1 Z$ b* P9 X( F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. W& B4 b$ q$ n0 Y( o/ x0 i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  x1 U7 n8 `* M$ B5 t* M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 Q9 p) }  F  g5 s% u/ A- X- Z, O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, R9 T( g) y* P5 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* Y% J7 o0 B) k7 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 n! [$ q- _# T6 [8 y1 g8 f" u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 n1 k; q) a3 y) X+ h  i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 L9 u0 s9 M  a+ P' X$ Y( Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ o' G, L& v: e, a. u4 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% z' ~" d2 @# T& j' I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& A4 B/ |* G3 @: T' r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  s5 `4 {1 }# x# v  T' B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% V. U$ m* G6 Z2 J' R8 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ p3 p& f$ ?* a  `, t: @+ {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* E9 n/ S& B3 Y1 C/ ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 n0 T" Q! Q4 F; @' ]9 K, j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: }& Q$ F# @' u- D7 h" R2 y) T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) v  y" F/ |7 b( U% s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# \4 N  W  b6 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 G$ Q7 D6 c, }$ i( u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! H, A  `0 P5 ]3 B! _- A; ^0 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ `( J9 S0 F6 Z: o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% o0 O9 s" J& F  d+ s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 L) [. M  t2 j! A4 N! `/ M1 F9 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; `+ i  P0 |, y# @3 J3 f" ]+ s9 x我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 i! \/ {( _! V+ d) ?, z  j8 I( v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>