【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
8 L- f6 H) c2 B1 x! VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& g1 z6 l8 i$ QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 A6 a- A' {/ Z1 t* ~/ n2 CFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
' T0 R" l! X# }. P2 U( kWe meet and talk everyday,
) c$ y" `5 v/ hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% ]* v9 N- ?; e/ `9 X+ S6 lI would probably know how you feel
, l" {+ D, }# _0 n5 fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 f) V" V) ]7 }" a6 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, h8 F( W3 i4 g) j# b) k2 c$ O/ F8 ]Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) Z: W' {; g" C! J& e+ |7 C  mIf today isn’t too late,
, e. m2 _7 s# W  v2 Y3 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- q7 o7 q8 l& T, R" c8 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 z4 U" g% _& ~7 I' g6 j" PCan I entrust it to you?
: s2 @2 t7 n! D& F2 y1 x' NEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 B  b, p6 F' s- ]8 [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! g+ Z$ C$ @5 B3 H. F. [+ X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 v2 m% ~' N9 o! C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: W2 I# D- f7 o5 }) d  t4 Y/ d<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 \3 \8 G9 l9 k; ]" y; t) m<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# p+ ]1 j# Q/ _1 U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ Q9 c7 F  V! X+ m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 t, G& h, G4 _& A( x+ I: |$ }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 L1 k7 k/ M. T7 r1 {' `9 Q0 i7 ~  c<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 u% O+ d& ~9 S! a6 Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' y% j) a* y2 B' j7 E& y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% I- H$ m+ X' v3 A. ?) z3 b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, s. L# M" _9 L4 a& v. [/ T9 k+ W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ N* n/ O/ {7 g4 w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ Y. Y6 ~# u% P+ |7 C+ I1 @! J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  }. u9 Y, n) f4 L. O# v, s* ~" Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 a& A5 m$ m/ ]. w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% S8 ?: U3 L  G" a# h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 x. @9 g1 o" R2 V( S/ X: o6 c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 i, ~/ R  x8 C- l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 S; @3 O8 [0 W$ O0 B' G0 a8 Y& X<P>But I never did </P>
  K1 E9 E& r9 V9 v+ j<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) H. ]8 R- i* y& E) X  \5 `7 |6 }, r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 v' d, z7 i5 d% R" K9 y* X; H# c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 T5 A- v* a6 A( @0 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 W3 G0 T% c  ^) w- |* @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; b6 u1 P6 ~# Z) R  E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& j, y9 k# Z1 \# `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: e3 U9 x4 Z1 B% j; [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" O4 p4 y* C* e' E4 `<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  Y' O9 a: E$ f+ l4 J9 o$ p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>