【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 {3 d) ?' u6 F7 N我另将歌词附在此。
# u0 l$ P8 E1 E/ G; IThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 ?0 s7 g% k' S# [, d5 q' dFrom the first moment we met,
5 N# e' q' ?+ d' vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& e3 S. H+ j/ e/ ~& CLove… just the word love
  f  N3 K$ v. h4 S4 Q7 j9 U+ e# qWhy is it so difficult to express?
: v3 z% Q1 c- z. o1 a, S* sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 a- r8 ]0 E: |& I* @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; E+ e0 J/ G4 [7 [6 h; N: QIf today isn’t too late,
0 c1 [8 m7 e: L- o" T7 ]( RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& z# }9 d; b! l3 ^4 |) H4 yEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 F: Y- _# C2 K. D1 C' i- TWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ l  W- X  |% f+ G& nI want to confess that I love you,
( `% t6 i, h9 w3 `2 F; w2 cBut I never did
" I* @8 x2 ~$ E: [2 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 ^, ]3 K5 ]+ Q$ ]3 g' [5 DIf today isn’t too late,
+ f  T5 y1 V' ^% Q# r* _+ ?- VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 D0 R( ]0 G" [Entrust my love within your heart
- R4 Z4 w7 b: Z0 R( ~  bCan I entrust it to you?
) c5 Y6 Q& b9 O" wEntrust my love within your heart
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: v1 u+ f3 T1 @; W; W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) g3 Y- v/ {5 D5 K; C: Q" N/ j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 N# Y% V& D. _2 {& T% @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) Y2 X8 @' i5 S7 ?+ e( c  _9 d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 n2 q  ?+ Y" A7 ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 G9 j4 e2 ^; q: S, e: R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, }; R8 O0 h0 ^& @* a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 {; l& V+ K/ q# s9 [" L5 u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 j4 \7 v' q3 l9 _2 B! Y% u) Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- d. u8 ?9 {  t6 l8 L<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# x) B" L; _; ?; u/ j0 E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" {) a$ n, m; s9 E! J# U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ h/ q, O& M& j% }4 C& J3 k/ M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 h/ R3 `+ r. w+ e7 j! P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 l9 Z' K- }* y# W$ Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; w4 }/ p5 Q+ ^1 v7 b3 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 B6 K) E) |$ ^  ]( R3 \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ R# q. T9 {5 l$ P  B8 {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. Z" O* W6 a/ [  m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 m0 g6 P$ N3 V  l' i( s<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' E: q9 V+ {5 a/ k! r: Z& ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 d7 |2 N3 F' ^- t% ^, R( ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 d" S# Z+ p9 S- u" e2 w9 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ ]8 v  s0 i% b1 n3 u8 I6 P  C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 O& w& s+ ?+ O- n4 V, ~3 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. o& y  [- n3 H; w* c& D<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" k; c( m5 B, X! G7 T8 L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- s/ E) R% U3 K/ a1 C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>