【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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& P" c1 A8 g# Y" o3 Y3 r! a( A我另将歌词附在此。
9 ^# z" A" ^* d7 b# J' H9 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 I7 Y: ?5 _7 f8 vFrom the first moment we met,
  Q+ d& T# U" B* \- EI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; _. x) {$ o: R( l; G) t/ Y2 |1 tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# P$ U% J1 p8 h  p% C( A  V  e& wWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 U8 ~$ G( m5 c9 T/ O0 k# WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 N% g1 |: r. O2 CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- }2 m3 S$ R$ x+ UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; t5 Q! G  @  K3 {* _Can I entrust it to you?
4 R& l3 O5 V7 z  ~5 iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 o2 \7 X8 i! X) r9 h$ `. rBut I never did
4 L! F2 O# z1 v9 V. m4 A9 {% `( SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" r! ]. @8 _  P% A! h. q% AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* r6 [5 R% W! U: BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! ~1 b/ I9 l# l2 M4 k% yEntrust my love within your heart
" g: B; z) M6 S5 G( U4 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% [2 N6 _. \( F7 {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 _8 o, A+ _  ?  Z5 f5 [+ O4 ]/ @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" U; G* N( w% N6 z. a- L0 ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 T8 b  O1 G- h5 ^; W<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ {7 C; U+ E6 O8 y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ g5 ~( K8 a6 I7 F- z1 w<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 d  `4 T# Y5 B$ r+ n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 P% y) [( ~2 y+ |) G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 {* j/ T7 l3 [- i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* d* G8 _. T. h! Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ W. G5 M1 _. E7 T: Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; g" P! ^5 H8 j$ C9 r/ i, y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* O  u1 E4 S6 d; O3 w. c2 b" ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ B2 c3 C( ^( [7 w* q6 c7 \8 A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  h) z& H* ]4 b2 P, k& s7 O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, k: \# S3 @2 H" C& @: R( r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 @  Q$ k- C+ h6 J% [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ G6 L$ k  W7 J: ^<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 G1 }6 t0 D) f' T" `, L6 {  x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& y" O* a) \0 [. l% E( j2 J; l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 r. V; @, u0 N4 s8 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! {% C2 p2 S+ |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; p' P* l( L5 K) |$ s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ h. V3 ^: I/ S3 r6 X8 p" _ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 @$ S2 S' N, \' ?3 ^/ H; V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>