【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  Y- e2 c* E  e( |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: F0 y0 w3 D' t( _# ~$ ]# M: q1 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  Y" @/ l' _& q  M4 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 e! x+ `/ C$ b  X* d* a9 |) f5 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
, S: N, g2 c6 i3 ~% ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) c; O, u& l9 r2 A# \4 _, f2 |6 SYou needn’t fear anything
2 m* d% ^% O# C/ [- cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( x" o8 L/ ~% i$ a6 }0 DI love you I love you with all my heart
9 T4 y$ J7 c: x6 W: q" s  K+ ANothing can compare to my love
7 _8 k9 E! d# J* X1 v4 m: n2 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 R- B& b, H  b5 \- kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, y+ g$ f2 J( c! l7 r9 J2 L8 F6 ~% [1 jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- q! m6 O% j! ZI regret not dying
6 b/ T$ S0 ^/ E$ w) n5 X+ i6 eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. L! K, M  D3 S, P8 n$ ?: CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 Y' v" H* y0 ?+ r0 w4 W0 _) dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. g- Z$ o3 |: r/ m2 L' ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 J9 ?1 u& S; V3 O' {  J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ K$ v- W6 ?# I$ o. R+ }7 t6 Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- d$ S) f: @9 X& s' p' @' ~0 T) J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! g4 y: O- v! l3 i/ t8 h/ n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 W) X% |+ e' l5 K8 s8 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ g2 x1 Z4 J7 }$ t! h1 Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' r2 H9 R  T) l7 ^( b& e. A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 p$ e7 U! c" H1 {: P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  i2 c4 Z+ A$ c+ I2 o4 G2 B+ j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 o( O4 D( t; O5 H* d; n8 L: @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 t' q. I+ q) V3 d7 |* W6 A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# d" u# A$ Q4 C( v( s4 G" i0 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 y% V4 z4 A9 r3 W6 |: }4 d; {8 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) z" F2 C% v* ~# P, c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 h/ q: Y# `0 n! [/ P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 n8 E0 |/ |3 M; d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: ~+ `- a1 q; L' x9 I5 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  B+ c  n% y# r0 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 T: o0 G6 w3 |3 R/ a9 g1 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* q- S$ R1 y% N: t2 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* R* c' `/ P5 E; Y- p% M1 f( }- ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# {4 x' E. w! d: f4 ?0 [; B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& A1 |0 t5 n" r6 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* D/ E( I3 m/ A  m- O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 g/ y* B+ q# I2 \% S. d9 ]5 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* T* I5 l& n/ W  `6 A' x1 B# D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- s! P# ?1 A5 B# u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 {! N/ M) r0 H2 `/ e1 c) J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 W) O4 g6 C: w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# j/ T) G- S7 F: t& X1 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 v$ k/ @! o5 k2 p, M- P% M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>