【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 T: ~2 z3 v( |) ]0 V歌词我附在后面。
8 V% u" ~4 G3 @; U; OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ `1 {% \5 O7 }( d' p- a" S0 n4 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% |3 M3 K+ b( N! g: B) H  L9 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ z7 B  ?2 ]( [$ U9 d5 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 F: i% o2 Z3 }. g: A/ U4 ]With the moon kissing it every night
' h4 @3 K3 k/ a* {! I- K5 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% {% l$ \/ v5 N  yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: |0 F: \3 e' D' iEvery other word you utter is love
& C4 R: H, C# EI really want to know just how much you love me
  Z9 T5 Y- J  R1 \I love you I love you with all my heart
) Z* j; `, e3 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 g2 D9 _3 J" \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 S4 M7 h$ x- k6 pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' Y+ a$ R  v' v; j$ X8 d# d& _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! o5 t) |" X6 t8 a9 W: lWith such a tongue as yours,
8 g0 v1 W, f5 a1 d7 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' \+ t3 m; G, T. J& v$ `7 w) ~; wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 Q% H7 v# K. K/ X+ b% o. U* J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- f  f; q, C' ~6 A  C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 x( j' V+ w4 b5 F2 R5 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' v( F; r) K. J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 S5 E1 C, r7 ^1 D2 C9 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. S! {, y5 }5 g" _" [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 H- C: A8 n5 k  F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 x# l2 I) J4 T+ d( n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& p& D& A. }7 ]; E+ L, i# K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% `' l9 \( O5 p* a, ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 l: {+ y' h7 Q/ Y$ \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 K: A9 L# \5 V; a, [, ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: E$ J; A+ U) {" e8 ^6 r; y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) ?; Z/ j* @& t2 s& H% r7 g5 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# q' l4 N6 T: r* W# }9 {/ ?8 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& V# i* p7 \( g" A& d' \* N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) Y* _: p! o( }5 p: h# B& y& E6 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 ^3 w/ z) O( \3 h$ h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" _3 [% p: g, y4 j; n% G. p( d% ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 Z% M9 f- G/ J2 {: U3 e- l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 Z/ |" F0 e2 l  l! g) g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 }5 y* E- ?) W) h& T/ R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 R! S9 t- w6 O, A7 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) `3 I9 N  ~" X4 _8 [8 c8 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 m8 Z$ U" z  h& f" _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; U* j5 ^9 |: p* I: C% T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 u* g4 W5 h5 c# Y  T我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>