【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  _& k! B% u* P2 c- lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. _7 t; K3 Q7 |5 M; V4 M7 r$ O! `2 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, ?" p8 g7 s# `3 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  V' b" x% k2 L8 }+ wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; P! r& f( y  u7 X, d( k( y8 P: sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, ~% j2 v5 [1 ?4 [# zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 {; ~8 K; \# h; J7 nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 o4 e  j% Y. J5 _" O2 {$ b. UI regret not dying
! ?; G3 n0 r* J, }0 T/ z; s  DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 I8 [/ m6 H1 H2 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 w# v# U1 e; m7 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 V7 E0 l! x' E/ T/ SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 W) v; V. {$ i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ a$ x* W5 [4 k1 r8 U8 {6 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( G2 e; v7 Y! L$ F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& N; s5 @( A( u7 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 u- D2 d0 {, {3 K5 w8 V- v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) b$ }6 Z: G0 e1 v9 z* J/ t; V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' W, ]& @% K& _9 H" v2 D' D1 R! ~* B% L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% J$ E; j! J" p# ?) _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# N9 m8 R" _1 k8 i1 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 |) E% X4 V5 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 w2 m* P+ q2 H1 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. ~4 o( Y# y& b4 Q) ^" F6 ]$ U  N# M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 x/ r  w/ x' Z  |2 K0 k, V- j- z, a7 f0 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 F6 F, a$ O. f0 z0 e: r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  ~/ i5 b# }$ L' N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ b8 ?' H( V% @9 T* F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" b1 s; W( ?7 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; P" P) C5 Q& j( \% N! r( m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! w! l" L  J/ W/ G5 K# r<P>I regret not dying</P>
! j% G+ _: @; r! }$ @1 T% a% ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" l/ `9 Y; l3 t* d8 j( N" y3 t- I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 q( T/ M5 I9 {4 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ u0 M3 Q0 v6 D! p4 S5 t8 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ {; C: D4 |& M9 B2 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 j3 Y, c  B$ G- A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# E, U! P9 Y% U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>