【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* |! w- Y+ ~5 q) f* ^6 K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) C9 @" T' X1 F1 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ r+ a8 G& W1 R  D" f8 P, \* A! bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 U( i- a. T+ |, B: @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& n# w4 v; j0 j1 c4 IEvery other word you utter is love
/ b; s8 j$ ^4 V! d7 }  DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 L+ ~# ~. \, d8 X9 L" ^% WNothing can compare to my love
5 Q) w  ?& H# ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 u3 d4 G$ C+ ^1 z1 I/ s( H( zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& J' H5 A, ^9 {2 j8 g8 FI’m still filled with fear
# _6 A: o- b0 D4 Y; Y: k# aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# i( C& R- c8 U( JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 z: F+ y0 L) |% fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 n, ?5 R# L  s1 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 h7 \6 ^, d0 S$ r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 K8 C/ e$ _/ R- e* v! Z* R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 Y4 \* J6 W* B' h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 d& b+ c7 A" Z: O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 h) ]0 g1 e! Q" o; e& }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" w  G) {" y6 ^7 \0 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ o+ ^. S1 J# |5 @4 O+ k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" K& R" c: Q8 E& N+ W, O4 D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' U) S5 p- s; b( h9 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 Y6 y8 w) f# k9 f# T" y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) T0 W5 [1 r' ^: }# L/ @+ I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 Q7 c% S% v; C% z) l9 `; H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. c3 w$ {+ \' {' a( z( X5 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ z, j. j) n4 g+ p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ C; r# M& f/ |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 O& s  ]8 e$ D+ R+ k( Z6 a) ?* H  a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 R3 f9 B6 F- n1 x+ L7 I) k: C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; A# B0 {& i+ J  d4 O; M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, x+ {) K1 M( \% k3 ?) l- Y1 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 I: n' W# Y+ s. ^+ V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) S! ~/ n9 H$ D: R9 x4 v# J$ ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. f' d4 k; v3 n; G( R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; V7 e+ P6 K% G2 ]2 i8 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& J+ X( F" h9 O1 Y% m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 L* u( d0 g1 R# N' p& p$ K# |5 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' g) K, e0 I1 }4 M/ X$ m, U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# L6 r. T; f  v$ s- M! R- I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% ^! q: v+ j0 {4 I" S8 [  a3 U4 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 z& |6 W4 n# \7 {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 j4 c1 v! h3 K. X+ U, ~我请你剖开它

2 [* C, Z3 P1 Y4 D9 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>