【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 W% Z, {: }8 {* O  N# J我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- V' N9 T7 j, K2 ?! Y4 fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  O# x: p  S* @1 o, R& Q. tWe meet and talk everyday,
: v, c2 M6 L* Q. j* ?3 g# jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ |  F; U' _9 CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 F9 d1 m, w8 t) N' {) KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( @4 [) p9 ^0 \* oEntrust my love within your heart
8 B3 U$ M4 t3 D0 a# c9 H3 xLove… just the word love
! E! z( `' }( KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& U! i8 s7 h; I( E2 P& b/ fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( j" d: c. @7 i" K% P0 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 `2 E/ [% b9 p8 Y2 x5 eCan I entrust it to you?
7 |* Y- K. Y' P; N7 t" ^Entrust my love within your heart
5 U. V/ X0 i3 v$ R" TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 N% w; S3 Q& M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" A$ m' v1 a1 e( R  g+ e0 Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 T9 \: l/ b* P* R6 M3 N5 O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  p1 \+ G$ A* {& L<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& y  @0 P' _" |6 F7 q5 ?' V5 }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 c5 `% y# Z3 u5 H<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  j* v7 K% u9 |8 f3 m& w$ n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 _3 D6 i. V2 l7 z+ C: Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) |+ L) w4 v0 P7 v) e0 _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# F. k1 X! x% P' e/ b  r' K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" v! ?5 A' F& @2 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# y, H+ A3 E2 j$ p: ^6 W9 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 @0 }; Z$ ~) a2 O, p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 A6 v( B$ S0 q! c( ~/ l" a. Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% @" a3 A0 y4 J& J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 T3 R# r' Z* e5 v# h) _" _' S3 Z: g. E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( ?* Z( t9 _1 C( y; o<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 `2 B: U+ \. t1 @" o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% V6 A2 F, ?% V% |  [- |6 |) s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 h, J; i' p# U' E0 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% }- [0 X6 W+ r" o3 H- ~% {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 ~7 M9 P/ _9 j9 b3 u5 U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 q# ~1 M$ a8 `4 C2 V- N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 }2 u, n( N6 h, H/ p. y& ]6 i, Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 Q) ]8 C- Q; y6 b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>