【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 c, k; }1 ~% c  }- K4 J8 [8 RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( y; }7 h  H3 x; U6 uI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; M; Z% f7 B! h% g5 j' v5 p  MWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ y1 ^7 r" l* I! m; ]) L* QI want to confess that I love you,
* t6 V' N7 m: nBut I never did
: f- x* A, V2 k) W+ u5 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" x; b( K" P# R  h$ ?* YCan I entrust it to you?
! Z; o1 x# n* n* U2 I0 L) b* |Entrust my love within your heart
4 m% i4 v  l1 i$ b3 t- V7 QLove… just the word love
4 N& x0 w/ \# ?; H* j/ ?3 aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 E2 M& a4 ?3 uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. O) }+ m7 G) [5 d. m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 }! Z- t5 _- V5 l5 R) l# D. v9 }( H1 e1 j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- a# L3 K# k. f& \5 m- K3 J0 {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 y3 j: E# E/ R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. j; |( t6 D& e2 f3 Y( z3 O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 B$ _- U1 G0 H( m2 J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 l) e- k/ g0 M7 ^" Z4 P' S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 f, s: P, g0 j: g$ y( O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, q5 F* k+ b' V. r0 z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' ?- r' O, q$ g( W: N  A0 D' P' h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! l. H8 T, h/ o5 Y  q& x<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  O+ n9 Q1 ?0 ~2 ]# N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& K& T4 M5 B. r) R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# m) ?2 r  O' L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ I7 Y+ t# p  _1 N* s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! `8 H0 l1 o0 m, I- u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 N- E$ e: v+ r7 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- a' x; O1 C: f) g; d/ m3 @, z! _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 t: c- v. ?$ P/ O" n1 w<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. q* X' V: g8 _+ y. p# J" x$ A: E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- M# }- C7 m. ^8 b- e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
- ?5 j+ y  }5 t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 X3 g# Q6 o2 i0 ]<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 ^+ f3 O/ x8 h; G' K8 H1 A2 D<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ j! |. V: E* `' `! c3 a/ ?5 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ ^( U) x6 J! ^* T5 |# J+ N7 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* l, F3 z) C3 v- L* B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) T6 F9 u8 D, Z' _8 v0 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 s/ O& H' U0 J. {1 f, |* z7 O7 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& R2 V" [. e* T( r( P( C7 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( z0 F9 Q1 r' g+ T$ Q: n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 x8 G3 ^' D2 ^/ k3 L3 l4 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 a2 r6 Z0 b2 b$ [4 K" {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>