【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# ~" z  m0 W, A, l% z$ j9 |  [# @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 |( \( S: H' m$ MFrom the first moment we met,
! r" \% O$ n/ r" NI already loved you with all my heart
5 V4 |/ y, M: n6 n, V9 r# VWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 N; t) g5 d! N3 Q: \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  Y- |* o7 {7 }4 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! _& Y' A7 w: K  b. S$ j& K* ?If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% P! O8 C% }4 x0 rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 a1 {3 H/ B8 ]0 }4 B% R" G8 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 J. k- {' |: k1 ~& IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* h: E- }$ Z  Y2 z6 }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# s3 n  ]# e$ D4 DEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. ?$ y( ~  W2 y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  u' ~- D0 C: Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( g1 Q; Z7 r& a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 [) e; b+ B: X0 \6 [<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 Z* @$ T8 p( W, D; g4 \: \1 f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) q, z+ G" N- m! S! x  [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 N% r" {, J/ ?8 Q7 u- O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% k7 _: R- O( `; @0 W. B<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# c: I2 n: Y/ N- H/ l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 |9 ~+ {, P$ |4 n# I6 i3 v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 f- J, j) \2 Q: _! ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( q" ^  a: d& E! `. T' f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 k" O% d+ Y/ t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& p( D6 m* p! l+ F' J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- t! k5 |0 k, f0 v1 V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 r& b7 h$ x' J2 B% Q" M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' [) |3 z1 o# g& @<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; M0 }: t& |. ?" W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 \9 @# ~) P4 l+ [3 _$ K) W! m<P>But I never did </P>
. v6 ?1 R# t8 `# a<P>但我不会 </P>
1 Y2 d) V3 \: V/ L<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ F/ F6 j- f* @% `- R) M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 k$ M; w% n- I/ S' @<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ c! D7 M1 c0 H. W7 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ F+ l" o/ M: T" `  D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 m" ?: C: C! A0 @0 [9 i( n0 x9 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 c" b) g5 ^2 ~) U3 b% e" Q/ y, w+ K, i6 M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 b5 u9 g" b, X! I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 P" U6 s: g/ _! P& `; v* J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( A2 t  C# m' {0 E) w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 m# j( G$ B& r% l  M 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( v$ ^" ~  j6 s3 P  l1 u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 Q1 Z" b4 t% |& ^4 n; `3 d: c<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>